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Comment on Selections from “Rick & Roy” by aron

aron — Wed, 21 Jul 2010 13:02:07 +0000

Прекрасно видеть фамилию в титрах!

Comment on Score for the Birds by aron

aron — Mon, 19 Apr 2010 11:37:36 +0000

Очень хорошо,но птичку жалко

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aron — Sun, 24 Jan 2010 08:59:01 +0000

Это Троцкий и 17 год

Comment on Schindler on the Roof by aron

aron — Fri, 25 Dec 2009 07:58:58 +0000

Прекрасная мелодия с русским бесшабашным юмором

Comment on yet another waltz by Иерухим Раппопорт

Иерухим Раппопорт — Sun, 15 Nov 2009 08:14:30 +0000

Вальс очень красивый достоин Валентины Васильевны

Comment on yet another waltz by Иерухим Раппопорт

Иерухим Раппопорт — Sun, 15 Nov 2009 08:12:03 +0000

Чистый нужно пить на вдохе и не дышать.Затем вода.Я бы все-таки рразбавил до 38 чтобы не обжечь желудок.

Comment on yet another waltz by арон шмерлинг

арон шмерлинг — Wed, 04 Nov 2009 04:32:31 +0000

Скрипки не разбавишь придется пить чистый- вредно.все-таки 96-процентный

Comment on It Pulls Me Down And Then I Leave by арон шмерлинг

арон шмерлинг — Wed, 04 Nov 2009 04:25:19 +0000

грандиозно современно свежо

Comment on yet another waltz by isak blum

isak blum — Fri, 23 Oct 2009 04:55:54 +0000

Great!может быть скрипки разбавить чем-нибудь

Comment on Dream Within a Dream by Gary E. Andrews

Gary E. Andrews — Fri, 23 Oct 2009 03:58:54 +0000

Saw your post on http://www.Songwriter101.com

Introduction: 11 seconds. Good. Short. The rule: “Don’t bore us; get to the chorus.”

Enunciation? I miss a few words, which robs the whole line, which robs the verse.

0:54 upping of emotion. I think it should maintain urgency on the next line. It drops back down instead. Enunciation loses me.

You get to THE hook/title about 1:16. Ideally you want to get there as close to or before the one minute mark.

Sounds like it’s going very well. The prosody, marrying of melody and lyric, is very good in my opinion. I like the poem. I didn’t know Poe had anything so mellow, and your melody is very pleasing and memorable.

Here’s what I think I’m hearing, and not hearing. I’m the receiver of your communication. But you’ve got to deliver it to me so I can’t miss it. I can’t come and get it. You have to deliver. See if you agree that enunciation is flawed where I don’t have the lyric right. Maybe it’s me.

Take these tears upon my brow, on my brow,
And in parting from me now,
???
You are not wrong WHO DEE? WHO DEE?
That’ my days have been a dream
Yet if hope has flown away,
In a night, In a day,
In a vision ?? are in love, are in love,
???
Is t/?? happy/// see or see???
But a Dream Within A Dream.
But a Dream With A Dream.